Polishing the Thesis Statement

The two elements in this sentence seem like a unit:

You can see changes in your health and appearance by taking sleeping pills continuously.

Make each element an individual component (separate from each other) by adding a couple words. Show the reader that they are the structure by moving them from the middle of the sen-tence to the end.

If you take sleeping pills continuously you will see changes in both your health and in your appearance.

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Another example: the two elements seem like one unit:

Thus, I would recommend my own methods to help you fall asleep easily and fast.

Again, highlight the fact that they are two separate components by adding a couple words.

Thus, I recommend my own methods to help you fall asleep not only easily, but also quickly.